Hey, Dan, I see you got two slabs on there now!!! /infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif
Those look good (as did your first attempt.) Of course, I can't taste them from here, but I think you are definitely in the realm of just needing to play with seasonings a bit to get it right for your taste. The meat looks good. I'm sure you're getting the hang of what they feel like when done, too (that was my biggest hangup early.)
Keep crankin' 'em out!
Rich